Week 4- Presenting Blog

Since I was not able to present with the rest of the class due to a crazy schedule this week, I am going to write a blog on what feedback I have received from my critical friends regarding my project to publish. I actually had to chance to meet face to face with one of my critical friends and that was simply amazing because she gave me some wonderful hands on feedback and help with my project. She helped me edit my document, move some things around and make it look and sound better than it did. She suggested I add some visuals to my project so I am working on that. One of my other critical friends suggested that I add more data (such as you did Professor B.) so I am working on that today as well. I am having a really hard time figuring out how to display the type of data I have collected. I hope I can pull this all together to make it look and sound great! Thanks for the help of my critical friends!!